All Comments on 'Becoming Monsters 1: Ch. 18'

Can't wait to read more - been thoroughly enjoying this series :) It's extremely well written.

Thank you for sharing! - Nexi

Would you believe I created this entire story just as a setup to have a world where a scene like this could exist for me to write?

What She Said :)

I love this story. Keep up the good work.

Cant wait need next bit please!

Next chapter has images. If Lit publishing schedules remain the same, that means the next chapter will go live in September or October. I'll submit it on Monday, but that time length has been my experience.

I can believe you did that. That is how an author should create a story. Kinda what i do. Can't wait for more! Especially Dungeon Delving.

So, nobody's figured out yet where Diane's ProGp went? It's not hard...

"Rock of Gilboobie" -- chortle! If I had been drinking milk, it would have exploded through my nose, eyes, ears, and likely my pores, I laughed so hard....

By the end of this chapter, it appears we are about to discover the magical Fountain of Splooge.

This gets to be more fun by the paragraph. Keep it cuming!