All Comments on 'Becoming my Mother's Mom Pt. 01'

That’s a promising start. I can’t wait to see where you take the story.

Not many characters there but I think you mixed them up anyway

After this story you should do one just like it but it's the son becoming the dad

a great start! Can't wait to see where you go from here. Pappasleaze!

Great story! Hope that Sarah will take care for her mother as husband take care fo his wife in any meanings ;)

Godd story hope that you will concentrate on mother-daughter lesbian repayionships further. This stories need no dicks as exclusion - rubber plastic dick XD

it is very aroused story even without actually sex

when the second part is coming out?

25 days and counting where is the next installment?

(( how long to wait??

Hello everyone, I've had some issues with the next installment. I'm trying to rewrite to not violate the site's rules on age play.

well ???? what rules for age play?

I really hope that there is a second part one day

hopefully we will see chapter 2 soon? Pappasleaze!

where?

most disappointing starting and not finishing your 1 story

5 star nice with a different economic approach to a story keep it comming.

Hello everyone, I've cleaned this story up and continued it as a novel. It's now called "Head of the Household" and is available on smashwords: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1482124

Check out my twitter! I post short stories a few times a week on my medium page. You'll be able to read part 1 of each of my stories here on literotica!

https://twitter.com/OriWynter

https://medium.com/@OrionWynter

If anyone was disappointed by the lack of a part 2 for so long, follow me on twitter and send me a DM. I'll give you a code to get the full book for free.

*if you're already following me on literotica, that is :)