All Comments on 'Becoming Myself Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

great...more more!

seeker71seeker71about 13 years ago
Intense

Really great chapter, his emotional turmoil is evident. I look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
fabulous

I love this ---cant wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
more, more, more

PLEASE! Can't wait for more. Really like the story.

lexvenelexveneabout 13 years ago
five stars!!!!!!!!!!!!

plz dnt take long for the next ch...

SecretDeviantSecretDeviantabout 13 years ago
SOO GOOD!!

Ok that was fabulous and you've once again reminded us why your one of the best authors on this site!!

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alexandra36alexandra36about 13 years ago
So interesting!

This is getting way interesting...I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Hope it doesn't take too long for the next one.

Cheers! (:

uchenauchenaabout 13 years ago
wow

i'm intrigued. I can't wait to find out what happens next and how he regains his memories and/or moves on with his life and find out What happens to wife and Jared?

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Happy Writing!

adjoaqadjoaqabout 13 years ago
lovely BUT. . .

If he couldn't remember how he looked, how then could he tell that his wife looked like him?

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