All Comments on 'Becoming the Man of the House'

Good try but you lost points for the overly quick seduction needs to be rewritten and more imagination needs to be in place of the seduction on both the mother and sons part

Everything else was fine just the beginning was poorly executed and their needs to be more to a seduction than just a day of real flirting and the next throwing herself at her son like and easy whore

As soon as a mother understands her son's desire, the quicker she can reward him. Beautifully written showing the thought process of mother and son.

I did like it however, sadly, we both know that this is not very realistic. Much more fantasy on how we 'Wish' things were. I felt more like I was on a speeding train rushing to my final destination. However it was erotic, none the less.

Crap like that out of nowhere is always a killer.

Not bad, I both liked how quick it went but then also think that it could have used a little more seduction. I enjoyed it.

There was a good story in this submittal . But 1 the seduction was way to fast , 2 there was no emotion in your writing ,it was like reading a doctor explaining a situation ! Good luck for your next story ! Build some passion ,try to make your words flow and build more emotions .

Thanks for the read.

Other than short and to the point nice story a*4* from me!

I enjoyed the story, it was pretty good. You do realize, you gave the young man a pencil dick, 9" length and 4" girth, that's only a little over an inch thick! Girth = circumference, distance around. Distance across = diameter, or thickness.

kids? Man of the House = Husband.

son must get mom pregnant with twine babies to become man of the house.

BOB IS NOW INDEED THE "THE MAN OF THE HOUSE' and in 9 months become father to his mother's triplets.

This is a super story and it's just fantastic I could not stop from Halloween it's great thank you thank you