All Comments on 'Becoming Who We Are Ch. 04'

With a mother like that, who needs enemies!

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I really love how this is progressing. Looking forward to the next installment :)

Still enjoying the story but nothing to add other than what we've discussed before (a worthwhile piece of work deserving of attention).

Mark and Luke's mother is enough to give anyone from a difficult family a flashback! Hard to get through that passage, but well done! Really can't wait to see what becomes of them all next.

Makes you feel a lot of sympathy for misunderstood kids. Great job.

This continues to be full of twists and turns that keep me invested in the characters and the various plot points. And now onto the next chapter!

I enjoy how the parents have the great disconnect that they wouldn't mind Luke becoming a lawyer when all lawyers do all day is write.

Loving this story. Filled with characters who are engaging and realistic. Thanks for sharing!