All Comments on 'Becoming Who We Are Ch. 08'

No joy for Luke!

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The drama continues, and I am still enjoying the ride. Jeff's anger is becoming more misplaced, and it's a good thing Melina wasn't hurt worse. I'm nervous about what he'll do next. It's a shame Shelly broke it off with Luke. Perhaps she'll allow herself to reconnect with him. And of course, the pregnancy test result was a huge relief to Julie... assuming it's correct. That would be quite the twist if it wasn't.

to get invested in the characters.

Good ,seamless writing.

A really long story with absolutely no issues resolved. Reading only for the sake of reading does nothing for me. It is now chapter 8 and I am still waiting for someone to become "who they are". I will check back just to see if there is any hope of a conclusion. Otherwise, I'm gone for good.

As OneAuthor said, it was a shame that Shelly marched out on Luke, but I'm expecting them to get together again. The characters are so relatable, they seem like family and I cringe when I think of something happening to them.

This is great please continue o cant wait for what comes next though my only criticism is that the chapters aren't long enough

You aren't nice. You get us hooked on a DAILY story then leave us hanging. LoL 😂