All Comments on 'Becoming Who We Are Ch. 01'

We have discussed this novel privately, Van, so all I'll do here is to wish you good luck with your readership. It's a worthwhile work and deserves wide recognition.

An intriguing...and troubling...beginning. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Great start. I’m really looking forward to reading the entire story.

Definitely makes me want to know what happens next. 5 stars!

in this venue, this story is taking an enormous amount of time dealing with trivia. there may be a need to develop this way, but you risk losing reader interest in, and who reads this stuff in the 1st place? not literary critics or journalism majors

Sounds like this could get even more interesting than the well-done beginning. Ready for more.

Really looking forward to reading more.

Off to a great start - really makes me want to learn more about both of them.

I graduated in 1991 and several of my close friends were Asian, and this is really true to what I remember them telling me (and in some cases NOT telling me, even though we were friends) about their experience.

So far, so good. Looking forward to see how Luke improves. If he doesn't, then I may go to another story. Bullies??? They should be in a separate school where they can bully others of similar ilk.

This tale harkens back to my first days in high school, an experien c e I did not escape from unscathed, and one that still troubles me to this day! But as trouble l ing as those times were, they helped build me into the adult I am today.

YOMEYO