All Comments on 'Bedsprings Arc Pt. 01'

This story is absolutely brilliant. Fantastically-written and death-defyingly funny. I was rolling laughing and I can't wait to read more.

This one really kicked ass! I loved it!

OMG he is totially batshit fucking insane. this story was so awesome it made me have a seasure.

This was such an erotic and yet hilarious story. You are great. Please do more like this.

Absolutely brilliant! A real talent!

Funny, snarky, sexy, and wonderful. Loved it. I wish I could give it TEN stars!

There is seldom a story with so much 'fucking' in it, that still makes for a good read. :D

Incredibly written and wonderful technique in stream of writing. Made me wet! Loved all of the installments. I rarely comment but I just couldn't resist giving kudos.

It started to get old fast, but when it got hot, holy shit.

this is soooo goood.

This is such a fantastic fucking story.

This is suuuch a good story!! Smirk radar Ha!

I find it very amusing how many times you used the word "fucking." I've never seen that word in any story that many times. I loved it. It really worked well with the story. ;)

--- Cyn

has ha I can't stop laughing!

This Mathew character is really amusing!

this is so funny! i love this story

I fucking like your stile of writing this. the way the guy things, its almost as if you lifed through it first person. And he also hates everything. Pretty pessemistic guy. And the braincells, lol... just absolutly funny. I like the dominate strike in Evan very much.

What a player! Funny story.

I love this story! I had read it a while ago and wanted to read it again. It took me forever to remember who had written it! You are a GODDESS! Thank you for gracing us with this.

LMAO!!! This is great. And hot. I love this story. On to the next chapter...

Oh my goodness, I looked through the whole gay alphabet of literotica. And now I have finally found it. I remember skimming this story and I thought it was a really sweet one but I had forgotten the name. Thank goodness I finally found it!!

almost pissed myself laughing??????????????/ lmfao.. x x x x x x

Damn, this story is fucking hilarious so far. xD Hahaha!

Evan please fucking die rosier,you smarmy bastard,please fucking die,he's fucking everyone in my family even my 94 year old great fucking grandmother he's even fucking my dog and i don't have a dog...lmao i loved it,it was so funny i don't think i will ever forget this story well done.love nix

This is the funniest fucking story on this site, possibly on the whole damn internet and maybe apart from the great T.P (totally different humor obviously) possibly the funniest story ever written.

Good things better be coming your way

I never get tired of this.

Wow, I couldn't stop laughing and smirking at this story's intro! I am absolutely amazed at Evan's confession! I did NOT see that coming! Good shit! Excited to read more!!

So does Evan really like him?

A pure 5* start. I think J. D Salinger would be quite pleased if she had read she your modern version of Holden. Pure gold, hysterically funny, and bitterly angry. Your work has surpassed authorship it is artistry.

I love you. This work is beautiful.

-g

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