All Comments on 'Bedtime Stories Ch. 03'

by bawidgetcoms

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rosegardenerrosegardeneralmost 11 years ago
Yup

I don't much enjoy non-consent, so chapter two wasn't a favorite, but this was really good. I repeat, you are very good with characters and pacing, it's a great story.

DwinohDwinohalmost 11 years ago
Much Better

I still hate that Jenny lost her virginity to the rapist, Rick, but I appreciate your efforts to make it seem like her uncle was her first; at least her first real lover. Too bad he didn't get to beat the crap out of Rick to get some retribution.

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