All Comments on 'Beep, Bang, Boom'

Nice story but very short .

I liked it. Well told

It was just starting to be a nice little story, built up the expectation of a fun day and some evening events and then - bang, boom, closed it off before going anywhere except to a quickie before the real day started. Should have kept writing and filled it in. what you did do was good enough though. Good luck.

Loved it, what a naughty ending!