All Comments on 'Beetlesmith's Ch. 09'

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mBrowmBrowalmost 13 years ago
Quite Enjoyable

A little cruel at times? Maybe, but quite a romp. I'm glad you have some editing help, quite beneficial. Fun, crazy story --engaging, too, with unresolved challenges! Please keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I'm enjoying these stories a lot, but I'm getting a little bored with Will mostly just getting a blow job or playing with toys. Let the man fuck some more.

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Reading between the lines - it is the curse of every writer and the duty of every reader. Erotica without porn is just tawdry fiction. Porn without erotica is just boring. My reaction to porn films is as follows: after the first ten minutes, I want to go home and screw. Afte...

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