All Comments on 'Beetlesmith's Ch. 24'

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

And, I think I'm done. I didn't even get through the first page of this chapter. I just don't understand the direction the story is going in. It used to be about fighting though hardship but still finding intimacy with the close loves. Now it's just page after page of derisive, humiliation, and cruelty. All the fun is gone and we're not even getting interesting sex out of it

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Reading between the lines - it is the curse of every writer and the duty of every reader. Erotica without porn is just tawdry fiction. Porn without erotica is just boring. My reaction to porn films is as follows: after the first ten minutes, I want to go home and screw. Afte...

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