All Comments on 'Before The Storm (Ch. 01)'

Is good, love to see the development and rest of back story!

What an interesting world! You've always built fun worlds but this has so much potential, like real mass markt potential. Those four states, the all the inherent mystery of the main character, and now the princess. Excellent. Granted as it stands it is likely to spicy the masses but if it was toned down it has the bones for a very intriguing story.

Definitely want more.

Thanks

WOW, bang from the start.

Damn.

Fantastic, can't wait for more.

Was this a trunk story? It doesn't seem as well polished as your other ones.

Hmm. I can't decide if I need a prologue for this, or if the stylistic choice of not having all the information available to the reader works well. I feel like the next few chapters will determine that.

More P L E A S E !!!

Oh, come on.

We need a god-d##$#@ sequel *yesterday.*

Pretty please lol

This is my favorite story of yours to date and am dying to see where it goes

I'm glad I finally got around to this . GR8 start .

Space Opera with a stowaway/package not new, but the Ashaka (?) presents an intriguing twist. I am impressed and curious to see where you go with it. Well done so far.

This story has an interesting concept from the let go. Looking forward to reading more of this.

Great intro with an intriguing hook. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

I was honestly unsure if this was maybe going to be pure scifi.. then it raped me, which was epic

Great start!

Now THAT'S what I call good luck 💦 💯 💥

Good start and then Serena.