All Comments on 'Before The Storm (Ch. 02)'

I am liking this story a lot!

I've liked a number of your other stories and I check back often. This story could be great and go a long ways. Chapter 2 helped clarify and explain much. Hopefully chapters little faster? Thanks

I swear I read something similar to this story on this site once years ago - not saying you copied it or anything, just that I've got that niggling feeling of deja vu.

Regardless, it's an excellent story so far, and I look forward to seeing what you do with a more sci-fi, plot based story!

I really enjoy your sci-fi/fantasy stories, you have a knack for them.

From chapter 1-2 the story improved. Considering I loved the first chapter, that is saying something. Please, please continue posthaste !!!

I’m really interested in where this is going. I don’t know enough of the world building stuff or a deeper understanding of the characters yet, but it looks good so far

The booty has been doubled. I have a feeling Mark just got a 2nd crew mate that wants to milk him.

All Hail Pimp Master Serena~!

Great story. But I wish you'd avoid the grammar abuse of "they" as if it were a singular.

Great instalment. Don't know much about scifi but enjoying the story