All Comments on 'Before The Storm (Ch. 03)'

Duo halo in space! Imprinting is clearly your fetish. :)

CP! Wow! I was caught up on the new releases from authors I follow and saw this one posted (started following you after discovering Quaranteam). Very nice character and world development. Slow start but you had me by chapter 2... and when Aliara began repeating "imprinting" I was hooked! You are a very talented writer and I impatiently wait for each of your new releases. Feedback: the characters keep breaking my immersion in the story by referring to the universe as "world". I assume "universe" based on number of light years traveled by gates as opposed to just the milky way galaxy. It's not a deal breaker but it is an irritating hangnail. Thank you for sharing your word art.

Love it

Something to link this with the quaranteam series. Way to go !

Enjoying it so far and looking forward to seeing more chapters

Absolutely terrific!

Imprinting! I’ve heard this before! Hmm, is there a link with another storyline here? Or just a common kink?

A weird twist... but really enjoying this story

So is this story related to your Quaranteam series or is it just a coincidence?

Quaranteam and TSM for sure…

Double trouble 🤯 or twice the fun? 💦

Excellent. Tones of QuaranTeam! ,