All Comments on 'Before The Storm (Ch. 04)'

Nicely done. I liked seeing you put in limitations on this spacecraft. The need to replenish supplies, air, and water as well as fuel will necessitate more interactions. I love the sex, but a good plot makes it so much better. I get the feeling that, at some point, there will need to more background information on each character including the ship’s AI. In the meantime, I’m just going to sit back and enjoy the journey.

Couldn't agree more JAFCritic

Interesting.

It really has my interest. Looking forward to more.

Great stuff keep it up can’t wait to see where this adventure goes. =)

I love the story arc and am looking forward to the next chapte.

Great story!

Good set up. I'm waiting for more....

Fun stuff! A curse... hahahaha

A curse? Hopefully it’s something good and not bad.

As commenters said on the previous chapter, I'm loving the links this has to your Quaranteam world. Another smaller connection others may not have noticed is how your main character always seems to have the ability to get out of bed and disentangle themselves from the tangle of limbs without waking any of the other occupants, no matter how many! A neat trick, could you possibly write a how to guide on this please? I sure as hell struggle disentangling myself from just one person in bed with me without disturbing them!!

Keep up the great work!

I cannot wait to see what the curse is, good or bad.