All Comments on 'Before The Storm (Ch. 05)'

Although Rose being in his head was quite predictable, I enjiyed the chapter a lot. Thanks for sharing it.

Elvis! Hahaha

Really enjoying this story

So glad for more!

Has suddenly become much more interesting!

Oh goddamn cliffhanger come on!!

Did Rose get a chance to program an Ai into her Ashaka with her memories and to act like her? Or is it that Rose’s soul is inside her Ashaka? This is going so great, how soon until the next chapter from Patreon drops here?

Buddy it's a wonderful story

Waiting for the next part

More please...really enjoy your work, thanks for sharing your gift.

This is one of the first science fiction stories I've read on Literotica. I'm glad I did. Your story line is great. You've done a great job fleshing out the characters as you're moving through that story line. Really looking forward to the next installment in this series.

Really great writing and story. Scenes just long enough to cary the story forward.

GR8 Chapter . Enjoying .

Going to be interesting with two voices in his head.

Nice job slipping in that tribute to The King on the tombworld... though both MIB and Dead Pool 2 would both argue that Elvis isn't dead. ;-)

Cock? Another enjoyable romp.