All Comments on 'Before They Fade'

Great writing ! Great read ! Even if this were imagination, always somewhere in the world there is a moment that mimics imagination in real life. I was fortunate to experience that with just one sister, and that was enough. She is gone, but I have the memories.

Great story. Once had a similar experience with two sisters who were neighbours. We were all early thirties. They also had been lovers for years, but wanted to try some male input. A glorious few weeks one summer until I moved away with work.

In the third to last paragraph, you wrote "not knowing it would be the first and last time". Then, at the very end of the story, the sisters suggest 'Wanna do this again sometimes, brother?' Unless there is some tragedy that follows, I'm confused as to which ending you wanted as a writer.

Yeah. Really like this story and hope there's another chapter. It's very well written and paced just right. Would really like to know how Aria, Milla and the brothers relationship develops or whether it does at all.

Absolutely brilliant writing, not over the top crazy just beautiful moment between siblings. I'm glad you ended it like you did.

I read until the end so I can't deny enjoying it. Good stuff thanks for posting.

You kept getting their collective ages wrong. Your editor should’ve picked that up, it stands out like dogs balls

I think he was 25, Milla 30 and Aria 32.

After all 22 is a bit young to be doing a Doctorate, considering one needs to complete a Masters Degree prior to doing a Doctorate.

But a great story nevertheless, 5/5 from me.

Would be lovely to add further chapters to this great story.😄

Great story. Can't say I believe everything about them fucking in the pool, like having saliva on his dick under water and penetrating his sister, but it's still a good read. Like one of the other readers, I was confused by the brother saying "not knowing it would be the first and last time" and then the sisters wanting to continue their fun later. Anyway, really enjoyed the story with the sex and incest.

Amazing

I enjoyed this story a lot. Definitely one of my favorites.

Yeah not bad at all, but you definitely need to continue on with this story there’s so much more you can do with this.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Had I stayed home and the family was a little more open....I might have been in the same boat...I would give my best to make them happy

Awesome!

Again great build up and climax!

11/10!!!!!

'He' was doing his PhD, at 22.

'They' were his older sisters at 30 and 32?

'They were 'five' and 'seven' years older?

Did you ever learn to count?

There was an overuse of “Sister” people just don’t talk like that