All Comments on 'Beginning Again Ch. 01'

Very good introduction to the characters, so much so the sex is almost incidental.

gets a very rare five stars from me. A finely-written, beautifully crafted story. Thank you so much for this gleaming jewel amongst so much dross on this site. I look forward to reading more as you craft it.

5 starred, favorited. We want more please!

yup, what they said, really good start, I'm looking forward to more

Esther x

Very good first chapter! Loved the way the story unfolded and tantalized the reader to want more :-) Thanks to the author for telling the readers his plans for the number of chapters. I can't wait to read more :-)

I cannot wait for the next chapter.

I like it! I like that there are mysteries yet to be revealed. I like that your characters have flaws. On to CH 2!

Kept my interest wanting to find what happened.

Fine start to your story. Begs questions needing answers about people I want to know more about.

—EAD member

North... What can I say? This is an incredible first chapter that leaves me wanting so much more! Thank goodness I'm so late to the game that there are a bunch of chapters waiting for me! I like these two characters - a lot. My guess is this is going to be a complex, erotic tale. Can't wait!

Well, this has seriously screwed up my plans to write tonight. Totally. Blew. Me. Away. You are good mister! (Says the Mistress of Understatement) :D Off to the next chapters! Cat x

Wonderful story with raw and realistic characters. Really able to dive deep and feel the insecurities, pains, and joys as they face and overcome their own challenges.

This whole story had a simple plot and straight forward message. And it worked really well. It had just few characters and just a few places, which added to the simplicity and hit the message home.

The first few chapters built some great suspense and raised many questions, and this made me excited to read more and learn how the story would unfold.

Thank you

Want to see how this plays out.