All Comments on 'Beginning, Middle and End'

I don't vote as a protest to the Trolls and Goblins.Nice plot, I was well pleased when Sam turned out to be Samantha. Nice twist. Keep writing.

You could stop right now and it would be a good story. I am afraid if you continue it will be ruined. I'll wait anyhow.

But I agree it would be great right there. But tak eit further if you must!

lover.... I was thinking she was just greedy because her husband was a good lover....then BAM!!! LOL!

Doesn't matter witch sex you cheat with, still cheating. Hubby needs to drop kick his whore wife until she spits out teeth. She wants a woman lover...fine, divorce her and go get a good woman for a wife, not this dyke ass bitch.

I will read the next chapter but, leave it as is.

I agree with prior comment - the sex of the lover matters not - she is cuckolding him!!! Now to make matters worse, the wimp husband doesn't care if she gets lots on the side?

This I don't understand, why is it ok regardless of the same sex of the offender??? Doesn't make any sense - why did she marry just to cheat within months and she admits that she is - no consequence - just a wimpie wussie husband who loves his deviant wife whore.

Not erotic nor sensual - just a fucking tramp parading as a caring wife.

You people are to serious about a story!

It was actually a turn on (except the word gooey, lol)

Please don't stop writing because of a few negative comments :)

A Girlfriend!

Five stars, Sacred Beauty!

Too bad there was no follow up!

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