All Comments on 'Beginning of Something New Pt. 01'

Ha ha ha. Just kiddin. Thanks for the story. Nice to read something bout Sistaz! Cant wait for the next chapter! Please, no BDSM, No Mistress-Slave and no Butch/Stud bs, just a nice loving relationship and great sex between 2 Goddess-Sistaz...

Loved it, as long as there aren't any nasty fetishes to ruin it everything shoul be more than OK!

5* for now.

Very nice beginning. Don't, let the emotions get carried away. Can't wait for more. Thanks

Can't wait to read more.

Cant wait for the next ch!!!!

Yeeess! You're off to a good start. Just be sure to proofread your work. For example, you said, Mayla stands as "talk" of me, instead of "tall." Little things like that detracts away from the story. I am looking forward to reading the next installment. Nice job melaninbabi.

Very nice..i do agree thou friendship and falling in love are kinda different so let them grow into love. This story has the potential to reach Hall Of Fame depending on how u develop the characters. So far so good👍

More please

Oh Melaninbabi…. It is 4/2/22 …. More to come ? Please !

good for now, hope you keep writing