All Comments on 'Beginnings'

Wow, very nice. I wish I was the male in that story.

Please write more extensively?

I enjoyed it thoroughly though I got confused a few times in the conversations as to who was saying what and what if anything was thought and not spoken. The story was fantastic overall though.

Sensuous and literate. Strong opening, a bit of confusion for me when you seque to the memory, but overall a very well written tale with a woman's perspective too often lacking on these pages. Keep writing, please.

I liked this story a lot, especially the second part (which I hope you'll continue.) I thought the main character's "voice" was strong, and her point of view was conveyed well. However, I felt that the action in the first part was obscured by distracting punctuation, as well as overwhelmed by over-description. I'm looking forward to reading more of the story!

Love your writing style...it's so well written that I felt like I was there watching. Thank you

You are a wonderfully talented author. Thank you.

Another wonderfully vivid tale. Great job at conveying innocence on the verge of experience.

I love your talent for description. It's so nice and erotic to hear a female's view of a blowjob, and being touched for the first time. It certainly raised the consciousness of my very first time, and how innocent and beautiful that it was! Thanks for writing this, and I'm looking forward to reading more stories from you.