All Comments on 'Behind His Back'

Anonymous is not alone re eyeing Kyle's cock. First Linda was anally fucked by him then vaginally screwed doggy style. Lol.

Great story; a thoroughly enjoyable read about the passions (and lack of judgement, or perhaps not, in fact) of youth. I suspect her relationship with Jeff is not going anywhere, and better to discover it earlier, than later. Very well told. You are always a pleasure to read. Five stars ~~ JB

PS: It's always a good idea to use a condom with anal sex.

With a friend like that who needs an enemy? Dump her sleazy ass post haste.

Enjoy your trip to the clinic after that nasty infection you just earned by being the biggest whore in your zip code.

Never heard the woman's taint called a frenulum before - I think you may be a bit anatomically confused.

And you mixed up Jeff and Kyle's names at one point. A little proofing wouldn't hurt. Lack of it ruined a potentially good story.

I think poor dumb Jeff just got screwed over by both his bestie & his GF, he could do better on both counts tbh.

I think Linda and Kyle will have gonorrhea in the next few days

Thanks for the feedback, guys. I really struggled to write this story because I was simultaneously writing a story called Lolly the Loser, which has characters named Kyle and Kevin. I mixed Kyle and Kevin up in my first posting of this story, then went back to editing a second time and apparently there are still issues even after that edit. My brain was just not "on" when I wrote this one. I'm bipolar and there are some days I should probably not bother with writing, but I just can't stop even if I suck.

Anon, thanks on the frenulum. I was thinking of perineum (not sure how to spell that) but my brain is a cesspool sometimes. I want to delete this story so much but I won't. I want people to see that the same author can write awesome one day, and like shit the next. This is the reality of being a writer.

I still think it's interesting that people respond so violently to cheating. It happens. I think they will all have herpes at the end of this. The longer lasting consequences seem more appropriate for these folks. Sorry if this one sucked. I wish they could all be amazing, but some days I'm just this bad. Ugh.

In life, this story could have happened. Sorry for Jeff but as eroticism goes, it’s an excellent edging story.

As always - very hot!

Fucking hell I wish