All Comments on 'Behind the Lines of the Were War Ch. 02'

this is going to be sooooooooo good

This story is awesome - but this chapter was too short!! and what did she mean by mine?

The chapter break is because it was a natural end point.

Outstanding bit of writing. But don't stop now , keep the chapters coming and on a roll. You got a Great Story Line working.

Submitted today. Keep the comments coming!

Another excellent chapter. I like the fact that Capt. Johnson is rightly punished for his part in the murder of the pack members, the fact that he was so looking forward to murdering women and children made me want to smack him around myself. It will be interesting how he will face himself after he sees those women and children, and the devastation caused, up close and not just as blips on a screen. Really hoping for a miracle for the Weres, I actually had a little lump in my throat while reading Joe's sacrifice to save his unit.

Derek's mate was Amanda in chapter 1 and now Anna in chapter 2

The mistakes you find after you hit submit <sigh>

The fact that he is Renee's Mate, that is just to funny... :)

Am liking this story very much. Thank you.

Massacring women and children. I still plan to read it, but I'm not happy about it.

I was initially expecting his mate would be Renee, but put off because she didn't recognise him during the capture and transport.

Mine oh my,she is going to hurt him .

Must be hell of an explanation to why she didn't smell him during the capture and way back.

Hang-on. So this guy gets the crap beaten out of him. Gets bitten, clawed and even has his balls and penis ripped open and then stitched back up. Which I am sure happened without any pain relief. And you're trying to tell us he somehow still managed to get aroused, whilst in agonising pain? I don't care how sexy a woman is. After all that, no man is getting a hard on. I'm out.