All Comments on 'Behind the Lines of the Were War Ch. 06'

Evil EVil EVIl EVIL.. The bond dissolving as a cliffhanger.. His sister challenged the male to an alpha fight, so Derek could be charging into his sister's new territory or to reclaim hi sister's body, and we won't know which until you post the next chapter ... Well done.. I've enjoyed the story so far, but have never posted a response on it before.. I think you're doing an excellent job..

Sincerely,

RayvenCloud

How much more do they have to go through before they find any peace?

It has been a tough couple of weeks for them all. As for Rayvencloud... BWA HA HA HA HAAAA! Cliffhangers are meant to leave you wondering! Especially when an author has shown no hesitation in killing off characters.

First I had to do a double-take when I saw that you had actually continued the story. I was incredibly pleasantly surprised. But oh, the humanity!! I can't believe you killed off Renee! and she was pregnant! How many more of the good guys must die?! Partwolf you are a dastardly fiend!

I'm guessing the bond dissolved because she is now alpha of her own pack??? So glad you decided to continue this

Who will survive?

Even though these are his first stories the only draw back is the ‘stiff dialogue’. Use conjunctions, write how people actually talk. Other than that I’m (not I am) hooked.