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Bronco56Bronco56about 1 year ago

Another great continuation.

On to the next chapter

5stars

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 1 year ago

I'd like to see more movement on the underlying plot line regarding the "conspiracy". I didn't bother to back into the previous chapters, but I'm guessing his benefactor starting 5 years ago corresponds with Jordan's death? August's mother was pregnant with him while his father was serving. How's the timing on that work? Maybe he's her half brother? Or cousin through Ian? Lots of loose ends! LOL! 5*

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