All Comments on 'Behind the Scenes Ch. 04'

I sadly didn´t like this chapter as much as the others. Two reasons for that:

Barebacking with people that have a lot of sex with different partners (presumably also foregoing condoms) is a huge health risk, and a big turn-off even in stories like this (fantasy be damned). Even or maybe especially erotica should be more conscious about that part of sexuality.

The other reason: I don´t like when stories mention how much someone comes (in the throes of passion, who has got braincells to count?!) or capslock /when/ someone comes ("CUMMING!"). There are better ways to get across what you want to say than this. :)

I know these are things that are my personal opinion, but I also know that some of these are things that are mentioned a lot in comments.

Otherwise, I am curious about what you have planned further. :D

M.

Really curious to see where this is going to lead to. Kinda feel bad for Connor now though

Absolutely loved this chapter and the story so far, thank you for sharing this with us, awesome.

I thought that the reason that he was in contact with Connor was because they were about to act together, it seems a lot of water has gone under the bridge since the initial contact and there is no sense of this happening anytime in the near future

Whatever Leo is paying for his gym membership, it’s worth it.