All Comments on 'Behind the Scenes with Mom Ch. 01'

Loving the start

Great idea! Can’t wait to see it develop.

I voted five stars because I like your writing style and how you keep the storyline moving in a good direction. One piece of criticism, though, I, like many other readers, do not like short entries of a story. It doesn't hold or pique my interest sometimes and I tend to not look for follow up entries. Use a little patience, and write more lengthy segments before submitting them.

I like the series of one-page stories. Sort of a sexy serial. Thinking about "what next" is fun. Having to wait for your to publish adds to the excitement, for me. Your tags are also spot-on. So many aren't. Looking forward to Ch. 02.

grayge37 I completely understand and you are completely right about my lack of patience. However, I don't like to be without posting new stories for too long and the feedback and comments I get here tend to encourage me to keep writing.

I have another story in the works that I will publish in its entirety. For this story I will have to continue with the smaller chapters, sorry. Thank you for reading.

Many families are in a similar situation. The relaxed dress and small space make it difficult to have any privacy. Seeing each other in state of undress is inevitable. Families are becoming much closer and helping each other.

I like the shortness to it. Makes me want to come back for more. Great job.

I like your writing style and although I think I know where this is going in Ch 2, it will be interesting to see how you get them there.

You really hooked me. I can't stop thinking about this story set-up. I would have liked the mother and son a little older, but that's not a big deal.

I am likening it it feels like this story is ready to bust open, nice writing *4* so far!