by wildtiger60
The story was lacking for all of that there was in it. It is always puzzling this new mix of all kinds of sex in one story. By puzzling it is almost like the writers are confused about who they are or they are with such inadequate sex partners they need a mix to fix.
Writing about people thrashing around doesn't make good erotic writing. What makes good erotica is forming the sensual story in the reader's mind. That is where sex happens and it takes time for the mind to react.
I'm a bi female. And I loved both of the chapters of this story. I especially loved the ending... I love lesbian sex, but sometimes it's good to have a dick there too. ;). Loved it.
Thank you! I'm a Bi woman and it was amazing to read both parts. Both of them had me hot and wet.