by IJS0904
This is a true story, wether you knew that when you wrote it, or not.... Well done !
One small detail, when they fittest made love, how did he do it without removing his underwear?
The love from the heart and body cannot be seen as a bad thing
Someone said true story.... NO. Clearly, you nor they have ever had to go through a terminal illness. Especially Cancer. While the site is meant to be fantasy every good story is based in what can happen to suspend disbelief. People who are fighting a terminal illness don't feel attractive, they've no desire to engage in sexual activity.
Well-written in such a way you felt sorry for them but had great compassion also.
Beautifully written story of pure love , and also one that i can see as being true , if it is then you gave your mum the one thing no one else could unconditional love , and i cannot hold that against you , but if it is fiction then i think you have future as an author .
Thanks for sharing. I don’t care if it’s true or not. Good stuff. I plan to read again when I have more time to soak it up.
Very touching. It’s easy to screw up a story such as this, but you nailed it. Kudos
A beautiful story of love and forgiveness. Many of us began it as a sense of duty and were clueless. Then of course we got far closer than we could ever have anticipated. Maintaining dignity was hard. Then it was all over and we kept moving because we had no choice. "I love you Mom" means so much. Thank you for sharing this.
Loved this story though it was short and a sad ending 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reminds me of the relationship that I had with my late mother. So close to home with everything. Great story and so sorry for your loss.