All Comments on 'Belated Honeymoon'

Nice job

Very sexy!

I would have liked for there to have been a little more focus on the Nude Day itself, rather than just three paragraphs at the end. I'd like to have actually seen James get a boner on the beach, and Gracie need to take care of it!

Yes, every time an author follows the contest rules it just highlights the criminal character of the infamous D.K.MOON who had the audacity to enter a story in the contest with the VOTING TURNED OFF!

Can you believe that someone would stoop to something so low? It's an insult thrown in the face of every LITEROTICA reader.

Good luck in the contest sir - I just hope that honest competitors get rewarded for once.

A reader in the highlands