All Comments on 'Bella's Beast'

Please continue!

If this turns out to be the lame knock-off of Possess Me that it appears to be, retroactively scoring straight ones across the board. I say lame, because in one spot, supposedly it's her father's life on the line, in the next spot, it's both of them. The story has already been written and written better. If you're doing an homage, put way more effort into it.

But so has nearly everything. Have to compliment you on the last line; "I'm asking for a damn pony."

keep going with this. Nicely done on your first submission.

This is obviously more of a rewrite of Beauty and the Beast than Possess me right? I mean the "homage" is right in the title. Also their ass on the line is two different scenarios. Stop being just a tit about "originality."

Please continue! Obviously anything based on a fairy tale is going to have some similarities to other stories, but really I don't care. You might want to get an editor from the sight though? There was at least one dodgy spelling ;) x

Looking forward to reading more. Keep us posted on submission dates please :o)

I would love to read an arranged marriage story where the kids don't feel sorry for their parents. Obviously her dad only thought of himself for getting into debt and pimping his daughter off to save his own sorry selfish ass. Hopefully her intended doesn't treat her like crap.

I really like it so far! I know it was written a while ago but please continue!

Please post the next chapter immediately. I've been waiting for the next chapter so I would not left hanging. This chapter was great and I'm excited to read the following chapters

I noticed that you updated your Bio in June, but you couldn't be bothered to write a comment telling us whether you are going to continue this? PLEASE just finish this story!

Why is this just left here please finish 👉this 2014👈

Rocco Prince