All Comments on 'Belle of Bellville Ch. 07-08'

This is great! Just read all 8 chapters cannot wait to see what happens next

I can't wait until that a...hole Charles come face to face with Jake and the boys and them knowing what he did to her.

You are a great writer. The details allow me to feel as if I am seeing these moments occur. I look forward to the next chapter.

Are Elena's eyes green or brown? And was Junior the blonde cowboy in the first scene of Chapter 1?

Thank you for sharing your talent.

Elena's eyes originally were brown, but I wanted to make them green. I guess I missed one correction. I've made the correction and uploaded the edited version just now. The only change I've made in the edited version is the eye coloring.

I'm happy to read you're enjoying the story. I'm finishing up with chapter 10 and hope to have the next part, chapter 9&10 submitted before the weekend. These are a lot spicier AND you finally get to meet our antagonist, Charles DeVille.

A clash is a-comin'...

An author and/or a story belong in my favorites list?????

I fail to check the list of similar stories at the end.

When I turn on Lit I check tne new stories for any continuations and if none are found I go back to see if any titles catch my attention or possibly one of my other favorite authors has a new offering.

Those that can write.

Those that can't read.

I READ

1 SO GENEROUSLY SHARING YOUR TALENT :D <3

2 The eye color clarification

3 The update. I hope Charles has an @$$ whooping coming his way!

She should have kneed him in the balls or, heaven forbid, used one of those knives that are always in a kitchen. Not turn into a simpering puddle of pussy goo.