by Daddysgirlfl
Normally I am not a fan of younger man and older woman romance stories but you made me "eat my hat" as the saying goes. Well done !!!
Just a great mature story with seaming real people. I'd like to read more of their story.
Dank - Billy was definitely no gentleman. Showered with her twice, got a hand job twice, and didn't return the favor? Ah, lawdy somebody needs to teach that man a thing or two! LOL
Nice fanciful story! Reminds me of a real life lunch truck in Van Nuys Ca where nobody missed going to the lunch truck. Hot little lady always wore a tank top without a bra and my goodness did she have the goods and know how to use them!
Thanks for another great read.
Thanks for all your comments! Glad y'all enjoyed them as much as I did writing them. These two and the couple in Boiled Peanuts are my very favorite characters!
Another steamy heat of Georgia story. Nice to read something slightly different bringing in the local atmosphere and foods. Good story with enough detail to fill out the 2 main characters in a relatively short story but long enough for a contest. Wouldn't mind reading more about Belle and Billy.
Very nice build up. Excellent bringing us into the details of the Georgia summer, especially the sweat in the oppressive humidity. Really enjoyed this one. Thanks.
Really nice story. Having always lived in the South, including some time in Georgia, you got the details right. Really set the mood.
I found myself rooting for Belle and Billy. I loved the slower paced build up to their relationship and that she had a fun time with Larry at the carnival. So many writers are just crude and repetitious in the sameness of their plots. This was refreshing and I still got aroused by your writing style. Thanks for a great story!
Lovely story but I found the ending a bit rushed I missed the part of their partnership with the truck and maybe their continug love affair.
Excellent story. Such a well written take on an ages-old storyline of May-December romance... One of my favorite genres. Keep up the great work!
Wow! I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I loved the characters and the pace. Your previous works that I have read... Well, spank material... That's OK, but I much prefer this.
Great job, thanks for sharing your work!
Nicely written...good development.....just the right "temperature" to get my blood moving...and...well...you know!