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by Kayaker

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Four stars

Nice enough, a wonderful slant that sounds new (to me) but there are one or two niggles that let the story down - for example, you try saying that very first sentence.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
GREAT STORY. ^*!^*!^*!

You put in, the best twist ever, i'am sure

all will think gang-bang, but it was

a great ending. Well done,very nice read.

..THANK YOU..

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