All Comments on 'Ben and Jess: Sibs Escape the Rain'

Love the build up

... writing!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful love story, looking forward to read the next story you publish.

Thank you!

I hope you keep on writing more and make this into a series!

First story? Really?!? Better than most. More please.

Very good. Deserves another chapter.

You write like I do: fall in love, then sex. And don't care if you ate crossing a society placed line. Gave it a 5

Loved the build up and natural progression. Looking forward to seeing more.

For a first story this one is really special and of quality well above the average here. Loved the progression and the love they shared, the real life aspects of the story, the life-like characters. Really really hope you deliver us more of their story and a happy ending for them as well. Gave it a deserved 5.

One of the best written stories I've read in a long time. I'm going to enjoy fantasizing about what the future holds for these young people. Thank you!

It does need more chapters.

Excellent! Keep writing.

Perfectly written story! Hopefully you continue the story would love to see what happens next.

You can't stop now!

Great story,well written with proper grammar. Keep going. They need to be at the same school next year.

Force yourself to wright chapter two

Loved it, patiently waiting

You need to keep going.

Excellent story. Please carry on with it. And other stories too.

Very nice!

Please Add more chapters to this story...

And please do not add any other charatcters,let it be just big sister and little brother love story.......please!!!!