All Comments on 'Beneath the Ice Ch. 02'

Wonderful chapter!

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Glad to see you back on Literotica. I’ve collected all your ‘Love, Ice Hockey, and Other Games’ series on Kindle, and am slowly working my way through them, but Literotica is where I first discovered you, and where I always return to find fresh new stories and writers. Alexi, Charlotte, and Zoe are compelling characters that I’m really falling for and enjoying following. Thank you for sharing your work.

I’m hoping there’s another chapter or two to the story. I enjoyed it

As stated by another, glad to see you back. I have read many and this one is shaping up to be a great one. I will be waiting for the next chapter. "Reflections on ice" is still one of my favorites found on this site.

Keep writing and thank you.

You are so good. When Alexei stayed from Friday to Sunday, it kept bothering me as it is rare that a team doesn't play on Saturday. You addressed it later that he took a night off and ended this streak. Knowing what a good writer you are, I should never have doubted you.

Great story so far! I like how Alexei is really a big softy.

Google translate says krasotka means gorgeous.

Hopefully there will be another chapter. I need to learn what “krasotka” means

another great chapter... I think I'm hooked!

I love all your stories, you fit this category so well. Thank you for writing and please never ever stop writing. I am thoroughly enjoying this story, cannot wait for the next part.

I have read all your works on this site and this is the best! Where else do you publish?

To: johntcooksey

How did you find her books on Amazon?

Thanks.

You've got some serious talent. Making me swallow this sappy Hallmark stuff and eagerly wait for more :-) Great story so far.

Thank you so much!

Great story! So glad you’re back!

I love your stories. Thank you for this one.

I can't wait for the next chapter. It is so good to see you back writing. Your stories are so well written. Please keep them coming!

Good to see you back. It's been a while on lit but you've not lost your touch, love it xx Sol

So well written! I love everything about this storyline. It's so sweet and hopefully we will not wait long for a third chapter... I didn't sleep all night and now I have to go to work... 😳😴

I haven’t read a Harlequin romance novel in over 30 years. This is what I would imagine a good modern day Harlequin romance to be. So good!

Alexei is the best, sweet and bossy, just the way I like em :D I'm enjoying your stories so much!

Wow, what a difference from the first chapter. This is a lot more interesting and engaging and less awkward. It is like night and day.