All Comments on 'Ben's Day Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Great story, well done time loop - hope to see more takes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Don't make us wait too long!

I want to know what happens with Ashling and I'm hoping this next timeline doesn't take half a year to post. Well done, please keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good, but stop here.

I like the Groundhog Day theme but wish you didn’t make it repeat for a third time. He left the bitch and got a new girl, so happily ever after. Now he is going t have to wake up everyday for eternity next to a backstabbing bitch. That doesn’t seem fair, no matter how much pussy he gets.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Could be easily repeated to often, needs to progress to a conclusion maybe with him gaining abilities to assist him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
May as well do more

It's interesting and some great scenes so far.

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 5 years ago

I guess it could become repetitive, but he needs to get with at least Ashling and Julie before it ends 😉

The saved stuff on his phone also hints at more being at work, as if someone is directly helping him.

Otherwise it would make no sense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Sorry

It's taking way too long to get this story. 8 months since Ch1, and at least two more in foreseeable future? I may not live that long! There's no more surprise in the deja vue, so do something with this or delete it, please.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A bit over the top? Yeah, implausible.

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