All Comments on 'Ben's Little Aisling'

When I started reading this story, I had no idea it was going to unfold like this, and I was pleasantly surprised!!!

I don't read mind-control stories, which I'm assuming this was, but can't be sure, due to the creative way it was written.

I absolutely loved the matter-of-fact way it was written, with no explanation given as to why the characters were behaving the way they were, just tacitly implied.

And then, when the fucking started, it was just pure heat rising from the screen.

Well done, 5 stars.

But did Aisling every get into college?

Great story, like the take on mind control without over-explaining it. Clean writing and to the point, well done.

Mixing the dad fucking with another man's fucking of a child, very interesting concept. The story presented itself as simple, no eloquent explanations or any kind of hardcore brainwashing or hypnotizing using subliminal messages. Just simple yet heat rising fucking.