All Comments on 'Bent & Broken Ch. 03'

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Corrupted_DreamsCorrupted_Dreamsalmost 7 years ago
Although auntie is a bit rude

I kind of like this story. Looking forward to read more about those two, nutcase auntie and her cousin

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Way hot. OMG, the part about just the tip slipping in a bit had me hitting the ceiling!

doug_noughtdoug_noughtalmost 7 years ago
Here's my 2 cents...

Okay, Guy needs to fuck off (Plot twist: Guy is gay) and Claire needs to apologize. Mom needs to come back and Jim needs to introduce Jaycock to her.

robinjay78robinjay78almost 7 years ago
More

Will there be any additional chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More, more!

That was a nice twist to throw into this chapter! Can't wait to see where the next chapter leads us..

scribbleskillzscribbleskillzalmost 7 years ago
well done

The slow build and over all flow are very well done. The flaws of the characters and complexity of their relationship makes it feel very authentic and real. seriously, kudos to you and your editor.

AthenaDevilineAthenaDevilinealmost 7 years ago
Hot hot hot! :)

My newest fav author. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us :)

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
his behaviour with Brie was reprehensible

To be so deliberately selfish and inconsiderate was borderline abusive.

It also takes everything he did with Claire out of the benevolent column and makes his motives petty and shallow.

And, sorry, but the addiction scenario was not realistic.

booty77loverbooty77loverabout 3 years ago

thanks you made me nut 100% HOT

seasteve123seasteve1234 months ago

Well done Jimmy!!

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