All Comments on 'Bequeathed by Proxy'

Possibly a sequel or continuation with the baby?

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love.

Why do they all want move to Cali? The worst taxes,schools,and government waste west of d.c. also anonymous this isn't a dating site.

Seemed to begin well enough, but your language skills faded quickly.

Pity.

waiting to move? i thought this kid was a spontaneous millionare? he should be able to just pick a good house and buy it in a weeks time. your story was nice but left some rough plotholes. can't wait to read more.

Nice written story. Waiting for next part of the story.

at rape...1 star

basically it's a rape story. forced to submit is absolutely RAPE!

Agreed! It's rape!

Before chapter 2 ended,I stopped reading this disgusting story.

I liked the story,seemed like his father at first controing,i like the baby

as it makes it more real as no birth control was used.

Not Incest/Taboo. Stopped reading on page 2 when spanking started. 1 star

It needs to continue as you left it open to see many more chapters

Honestly? I kinda expected jennifer to try to kill him when she suddenly became affrctionate. Lol. Good story tho ,keep it up

Somehow, making love to Jenny is not as exciting as copulating with mother. Knocking up Jenny is ok, but what is exciting is breeding his own mother.

ch.2 After moving to California, son gets his Mother pregnant two more times.

I don't like coercion or rape stories. Not a story I read in full or would ever start to read again. I gave it a 2 as the writing was of good quality with awareness of syntax, grammar, and spelling.

I like the story a lot, but it needs an ending. AAAA++++

I love this storey, but it needs at least another chapter. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved the story but you need to finish it and see where this goes 5 stars

Liked the story but you need to write more, does she have problems having the baby?? Do they move and live as husband and wife?? 5 stars!