All Comments on 'Berlin: My First Time'

Erotic and sexy in a way that excites and satisfies women readers. I highly recommend it to those who are bored with mostly male sensibilities in this category.

As a woman who has made love with women many, many times, I can honestly say that was wonderfully erotic, absolutely realistic, and hot! Women just write differently than men, and your story illustrates this in all the best ways. Thank you!

I read the lesbion stories not just because they turn me on (I am a man), but I learn so much on how to please the women I am with. That was soooo good, probably the best in the months I have been reading here. I hate that I am by myself now.

I loved the way you made it personal in the form of a letter, this is something I have been trying for some time but have still not perfected it. You built the story beautifully. It was a great read.

It does not seem likely that she really did stay "a lot longer" with Monika in Berlin. If she had, there would be other chapters in the series. I can't help wonder how deeply their infatuation ran during their time together. Did they burn up on sex. or did they find a friendly relationship together.

Please write more.

Wonderful. Beautiful. Romantic. Sexually satisfying. You have a gift of writing the most sensuous sex scenes. So tender. That's what i like to read.

Unbelievably beautiful... 5 stars, without doubt.