by Kimtacular
I'm glad you have continued your story and I hope you will post more soon.......
If I may insert some suggestions, please be more descriptive of your character's bodies......ie:
Sarah's - hair color and style, size, shape, legs, tit size, hopefully her pussy is shaved bald.....
Doug's - I am sure the females reading your story will want to know more details about him.
I felt this chapter deserved a high score...... Keep up the good work!
RecHiker
I was very happy with this chapter. But as the other person said...a little more description would be helpful. Other then that...please hurry up with the next chapter.
Well worth waiting for. I'm definitely into the story now! Keep those installments coming.
When you were in the bathroom you removed your bra. When you went into the bedroom you put on your pajamas. How is it you were wearing a bra when Doug was making love to you on the living room floor? Did you put your bra on before going out into the living room to get your bag. I like the intensity of this chapter.