All Comments on 'Best Friends Forever Ch. 03'

I loved the ending. It was awesome to see that love, true love can conquor any test.

Now, THAT was good work! All three chapters. (And I'll even forego the appropriate chastisement for the length of time between chapters.) I liked the story, quite a lot.

-- KK in Texas

Loved it. Tender, heartwarming, laced with life and it's tribulations. A work of fiction? No. A genuine work of art. Well done!

This story left me wanting for more. Sir, you are a very talented amazing writer.

i just read your story and was pleasantly surprised. I almost cried when i thought they had both died. and a gasp of joy escaped when i realized they were alive. Kudos for the story. I really enjoyed it.

i have read many but this has to have been one of the best. thank you

i read this like twenty times now awesome story thank u soooo much

WOW that was really great!! I truly loved this story. Great job

Morning, O dreadful dawn, spread your pale dim light

Reign for your last time over lands once so bright

But your energy shall be weak and is soon to die

So die in pain my dear, expire, goodbye...

Ages has past since your eyes enlightened the earth

from a source of light that gave all "goodness" birth

But your energy is weak and soon to die

The ground is sour from the evil that here lie

I have come to challenge your ways

Light's bane - The last of your days

O broken wings - My darkness enslaves

Allow me to erase your feeble race

Morning, so feeble dawn, spread no pale dim light

You've been breeding for your last time - A source without might

An epitaph of lost worthlessness - Still echoe your last cries

The earth is pure of the evil that here thrives

I completely enjoyed this story. Thank you.

The first installment was awesome. But it really just went downhill from there. You should have left it alone.

OK then...

um did see the thing with the supernatural coming. um great angsty story but some of the plot stuff just did not make sense

What a great romance tale of two soulmates who were right in front each other but didn't realize that they were meant to be together from the start until the end. An epilogue would have been nice. 5/5

What the everloving fuck did I just read? This is the most bizarre thing I've ever read on this site, and there's a lot of weird and abhorrent shit here. I really didn't need to read past the first chapter. This is truly a grab bag of awful, just devastating life events and dressing it up as a supernatural love story. If the author's intent was to shock the readers, success. But none of it was welcome or satisfying. I never want to read another story like this.