All Comments on 'Best Friend's Journey Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Meh. The characters seem like they could be interesting people, but you never developed any of them. Why not tell us more about them, and what they actually like about each other?

pkp033pkp033almost 2 years ago

Enjoyable start 🔥🔥

arsenic133arsenic13312 months ago

Nice. Enjoyable but could use a bit more life.

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