by Requiax
You are on to something with this story. What a great start-up. I love The Accomplice. I hope it will be a longer series.
A great first part with a fantastic and inventive flash forward-esque first chapter. Wonderfully exciting and well placed. I loved it. On to the next part! :)
Familiar theme heard before. Needs to be a bit more admission of both exh. and voy. between the girls.
Have a friend who needs the dare to be free to do the naked deed. This story is close to reality<
I sadly read chapter two first but I have to say this is great. The beginning was really well done, just cutting to the middle of the action, to then go to the start of the story.
I love it, please continue
Great story with lots of thoughts leading to future stories. Really great writing - and totally erotic.
I always like a public nudity story and I liked the prologue with the luckiest shop keeper in the world. It's a nice touch having her 'curious' friend there to show an interest. Looking forward to the next part. Thanks for writing.
You really know how to set the scene! Looking forward to coming parts.