by DappeDave
Chapter Two, while good on its own, is written as if Chapter One never happened. I rated Chapter One as five stars -- this one only gets four due to the retrogression.
Some of most witty and engaging dialog I have read in my 60+ years on this planet.
Please keep up the great writing!!!
Sure a nice story but it has almost no connection to chapter 1, aside from the main characters that is. What gives?
And I see that chapter 3 is going in the same direction....
I agree with the previous comment. This doesn't seem to be chapter 2. It's really a standalone story using the same names and some of the same backstory. Well done though.
Great writing, but I’m just as confused as the rest. Help us understand where you’re going…