All Comments on 'Best Friend's Sister Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
I'm totally confused

Chapter Two, while good on its own, is written as if Chapter One never happened. I rated Chapter One as five stars -- this one only gets four due to the retrogression.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Some of most witty and engaging dialog I have read in my 60+ years on this planet.

Please keep up the great writing!!!

Captain_FapulusCaptain_Fapulusover 2 years ago

Sure a nice story but it has almost no connection to chapter 1, aside from the main characters that is. What gives?

And I see that chapter 3 is going in the same direction....

jlg07jlg07over 2 years ago

I agree with the previous comment. This doesn't seem to be chapter 2. It's really a standalone story using the same names and some of the same backstory. Well done though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great writing, but I’m just as confused as the rest. Help us understand where you’re going…

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