by HornyMarsy
You HAVE to be female -- you use WAY more words than you need to.
That said, this story was super!
I hate stories, pics, or even movies of women going commando. There seems to this obsession with it. It's not the norm, and makes me think the author(s) or movie directors or photographers have a fetish for very, very young girls.
I have read several of your stories and they are really hot. Unfortunately they consistently have poor proof reading with many grammatical errors. As enjoyable as the stories are this really detracts from the experience of reading them.