by bmunchausen
..and I think you are making a good job of handling the emotions. It's an interesting story with great potential.
Thanks for the read and please continue.
Interesting characters. The thing with Maggie, been there, hurt like hell. I'd like to see where this goes.
Please continue, there is a lot of room for interesting developments.
What happened? Description didn't lie, that was about as fast a turnaround as you could get. Hard to imagine a way that Maggie (and potentially Phyllis) can not come out looking like a total bitch here, but I'll be interested to see if that's where this is going.
Now a tragic love story turns into a cliff hanger? This storyline just got a lot more interesting, was all of this planned by Phyllis, has she been watching from afar waiting for Johnnie to complete his education and become a success. Now I can't wait to see what is next. 5 stars