All Comments on 'Best of Intentions Ch. 02'

by bmunchausen

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More Please

This is a great story, would love to read more of it.

curioussscuriousssover 13 years ago
This has my interest...

..and I think you are making a good job of handling the emotions. It's an interesting story with great potential.

Thanks for the read and please continue.

AllosaurusRexAllosaurusRexover 13 years ago
Great

Please keep it comming, very soon please

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

Five.

jkneusjkneusover 13 years ago
You'd better continue

Interesting characters. The thing with Maggie, been there, hurt like hell. I'd like to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please continue

Please continue, there is a lot of room for interesting developments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Damn!

What happened? Description didn't lie, that was about as fast a turnaround as you could get. Hard to imagine a way that Maggie (and potentially Phyllis) can not come out looking like a total bitch here, but I'll be interested to see if that's where this is going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Faggot writer !

"1*" .

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Now a tragic love story turns into a cliff hanger? This storyline just got a lot more interesting, was all of this planned by Phyllis, has she been watching from afar waiting for Johnnie to complete his education and become a success. Now I can't wait to see what is next. 5 stars

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