All Comments on 'Best Present Ever Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Really good story. I hope if she chooses her dad that he does not just user her for sex and leave her. I personally like the happily ever after type of endings. Looking forward to reading what happens next

kiwi91kiwi91almost 9 years agoAuthor
thank you

Oh the ending definitely has something planed out. Maybe you will get your happily ever after, or maybe it will be the biggest mistake the 3 of them could ever make. You will have to come back and see!! I hope you enjoy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Sorry

I stopped reading after the part about her Hymen, I wish the writers would get a clue where the Hymen is, check it out on the web and rewrite your story.

RockyStoneRockyStonealmost 9 years ago
He stops when he felt my hymen.

Can't be a female writing; if the cock is 3 mm in, the hymen has been done away with. At least it has been stretched. I do know women that had no idea their cherry had been popped, few and far between. If I had a pussy between my legs I would have tried to read up on it at least. Pity, I was liking this author and the story.

RS

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
the definition

of a dysfunctional family.

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